{"id":60847,"date":"2023-07-27T02:50:11","date_gmt":"2023-07-27T02:50:11","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/jurn.link\/tentaclii\/?p=60847"},"modified":"2023-07-26T12:26:08","modified_gmt":"2023-07-26T12:26:08","slug":"letters-to-wilfred-b-talman-the-third-set-of-notes","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/jurn.link\/tentaclii\/index.php\/2023\/07\/27\/letters-to-wilfred-b-talman-the-third-set-of-notes\/","title":{"rendered":"Letters to Wilfred B. Talman &#8211; the third set of notes"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>Here&#8217;s my third set of notes on Lovecraft&#8217;s <em>Letters to Wilfred B. Talman and Helen V. and Genevieve Sully<\/em>. These notes cover letters from November 1929 to May 1931.<\/p>\n<hr>\n<p>Page 124. We get the last address of &#8216;Good Old Mac&#8217;, the boys&#8217; adventure novelist and sometimes juvenile fantasist Everett McNeil, which may be of use to those still seeking the lost letters and manuscripts of McNeil. He was with his sister at &#8220;Collins, 6227 Warner St., South Tacoma, Wash.&#8221; He died there shortly after arriving.<\/p>\n<p>Page 127. It&#8217;s mid April 1930, and Lovecraft&#8217;s summer travels are in the offing. He implies he is to meet Belknap Long in Atlantic City, &#8220;thereafter continuing southwards alone&#8221;. Thus it seems he visited Atlantic City.<\/p>\n<p>Page 130. &#8220;Strange musick around Red Hook [Brooklyn] seems quite a usual thing. I always noticed gangs of sinister-looking youths marching about with ukuleles and harmonicas, &#038; wondered what dark &#038; furtive gods of the nether-world they were hymning in their cryptic rituals.&#8221;<\/p>\n<p>Page 131. Said of his new story &#8220;The Whisperer in Darkness&#8221;, in mid late July 1930&#8230; &#8220;When I get a chance to rewrite it &#8230; It won&#8217;t do in its present form.&#8221; If I remember correctly it was relatively rare story in terms of being written away from home and during the summer. <\/p>\n<p>Page 134. The New Zealand amateur Robert G. Barr published Lovecraft&#8217;s &#8220;Harbour Whistles&#8221; (part of <em>Fungi from Yuggoth<\/em>) in his <em>Silver Fern<\/em>. Today the National Library of New Zealand has <a href=\"https:\/\/natlib.govt.nz\/collections\/a-z\/robert-g-barr-collection-of-amateur-journalism\">Robert G. Barr Collection of Amateur Journalism<\/a>. &#8220;This collection is catalogued online&#8221;.<\/p>\n<p>Page 135. On seeing the initials &#8220;FOFA&#8221;, Lovecraft imagined some possible meanings. &#8220;Fiends of Forest Abbey&#8221; and &#8220;Fifty Ogres from Acheron&#8221;. These may be of interest to RPG gamers and Mythos writers.<\/p>\n<p>Page 135. September 1930. Arthur Leeds was then touring with a theatrical company, and had recently &#8220;passed through&#8221; New York City in the late summer.<\/p>\n<p>Page 137. Talman wrote a &#8220;tale based on our good old friend Honest Mac&#8221; (Everett McNeil). Lovecraft notes &#8220;His real charm as a perpetual boy telling stories to other boys&#8221;.  Talman&#8217;s story was mangled by an editor. The man being &#8220;a sterotyped commercial robot&#8221; and &#8220;a big-winded office-hound&#8221; in Lovecraft&#8217;s view. The editor had demanded that a stenographer be added, &#8220;as if it were illogical for a writer not to be able to hire a typist&#8221;. The tale was &#8220;The Story Teller: A Tale of Christmas&#8221;, which survives in its editor-warped &#8220;mangled&#8221; form. <\/p>\n<p>Thus McNeil features as a character in another story, albeit not a weird one. I have a survey of &#8216;McNeil as character&#8217; in my biography of him. Talman&#8217;s tale ran in the Christmas number of <em>The Texaco Star<\/em> (Vol. 17, No. 11, December 1930), and is interesting as a romantic pen-picture of a key Kalem member by one who knew him. Lovecraft objected to the frock-coat in the illustrations, but thought the pictures &#8220;looked a bit like him&#8221;.<\/p>\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/jurn.link\/tentaclii\/wp-content\/uploads\/2023\/07\/story-teller-talman.jpg\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" src=\"https:\/\/jurn.link\/tentaclii\/wp-content\/uploads\/2023\/07\/story-teller-talman.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"471\" height=\"2000\" class=\"alignnone size-medium wp-image-60848\" \/><\/a><\/p>\n<p>Page 138. Lovecraft&#8217;s camera was, by October 1930, a portable &#8220;vest-pocket Kodak&#8221; though it made what he called &#8220;microscopic views&#8221;. This was then his only camera &#8220;in working order&#8221;. He doesn&#8217;t give its model or date, so the model can&#8217;t be guessed. A 1918 early &#8220;vest-pocket Kodak&#8221; model looked like this&#8230;<\/p>\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/jurn.link\/tentaclii\/wp-content\/uploads\/2023\/07\/vest-kodak.jpg\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" src=\"https:\/\/jurn.link\/tentaclii\/wp-content\/uploads\/2023\/07\/vest-kodak.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"528\" height=\"435\" class=\"alignnone size-medium wp-image-60855\" srcset=\"https:\/\/jurn.link\/tentaclii\/wp-content\/uploads\/2023\/07\/vest-kodak.jpg 662w, https:\/\/jurn.link\/tentaclii\/wp-content\/uploads\/2023\/07\/vest-kodak-528x435.jpg 528w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 528px) 100vw, 528px\" \/><\/a><\/p>\n<p>Several years later he tells Talman that he has photographed his new home at No. 66 with his old &#8220;1907 #2 Brownie&#8221; (a Kodak &#8216;box-brownie&#8217;), so he must have had it mended since 1930 or perhaps just bought film for it and given it a clean.<\/p>\n<p>Page 149. &#8220;Bedford is one of my favourite villages&#8221;.  The <a href=\"https:\/\/digitalcollections.lib.uh.edu\/concern\/texts\/zk51vh64r?locale=en\">latest <em>Texaco Star<\/em> has arrived<\/a>, and the &#8220;New London article interested me greatly&#8221;, and he was further captivated by &#8220;the whaling article&#8221; along with &#8220;the Jamaica article&#8221;. He eagerly awaits &#8220;the Providence article&#8221; in a later issue, to which by the sound of it he has contributed something. At this time Talman is working on the magazine. Not noted by Lovecraft, the latest <em>Texaco Star&#8217;<\/em> Contents page briefly notes that dinosaur eggs have been discovered in the USA for the first time.<\/p>\n<p>Page 153. Lovecraft reads the reviews in the <em>Sunday Times<\/em>, presumably the Sunday edition of the <em>New York Times<\/em> and not the <em>Times of London<\/em>.<\/p>\n<p>Page 160. Of his press cuttings collection he notes that &#8220;most of them are printed on such rotten paper that they perish in the course of a very few years&#8221;. Thus his cuttings file(s), which I had previously wondered about re: their present location, might only have been a relatively ephemeral thing. By Christmas 1930 it was possible to copy a document by hunting up what he calls  &#8220;a photostatic reproducer&#8221; who would change &#8220;50 cents&#8221; to copy the proofreading booklet that Talman had then sent. But obviously the costs would have been prohibitive for preserving newspaper cuttings.<\/p>\n<p>Page 162. &#8220;Prose must be created with just the same exactness, delicacy of ear, imaginative fertility etc, as verse.&#8221;<\/p>\n<p>Page 164. On Blackwood&#8230; &#8220;His prose is so accursedly bad and journalese&#8221;.<\/p>\n<p>Page 169. He reveals what he was doing in 1904-05, at age 14-15. Intensively studying the histories of the ancient world. On the details of the capture of Babylon in 312 B.C&#8230;. &#8220;in 1905 or so I knew all this just as well as I know my own name&#8221;. In 1932 he had to refresh his memory of some of the details.<\/p>\n<p>Page 175. &#8220;My postcard collection is classified&#8221;, ordered by place presumably, and it &#8220;hath now overflowed the trunk and includes two cardboard boxes as an annexe&#8221;. Today, the Brown repository only 557 cards, some of those not from Lovecraft (e.g. Cook to Cole) or if from Lovecraft are not picture-postcards.<\/p>\n<p>Page 175. &#8220;I&#8217;ll have to cook up some adventures of Ward Phillips, the occult deteckatiff&#8221; (i.e. himself). In April 1931 he was evidently perusing the &#8220;scientifiction&#8221; magazines, if only on the news-stands, since he remarks that he has not yet seen any Belknap Long science-fiction stories in these.<\/p>\n<p>Page 177-178. He gives detailed advice on &#8220;The Curse Wheel&#8221; for Talman, re: re-writing this &#8216;Jersey Devil&#8217; tale. Getting carried away, he gives his own substantial rewriting in five long paragraphs. New fiction from Lovecraft! Well, new to me anyway.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Here&#8217;s my third set of notes on Lovecraft&#8217;s Letters to Wilfred B. Talman and Helen V. and Genevieve Sully. 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